The first chapter (Feel free to give tips!)
1.Erin As the heavy rain poured down on to my face, I clung with my life to his hand. “Don’t let go Lucas!” The bridge under us creaked as a reply. I shifted my gaze from the river to him, but the Lucas I knew had already faded away. His face was bruised from all the trees we’ve ran through, he seemed to want to pull me back, wanted us to survive the storm, but I lost that spark. “You are just a filthy Lumen Erin, that’s all you are, and all you will ever be.” And he let go. {===} I still remember that night, how I had to crawl my way to the shore, how I saw my 8 year of life pass in front of me. I was just a little kid, I lived in the woods for weeks, always scared that Lucas would come back, realizing I was still alive. I may have escaped him, but even now, after 10 years, he still takes place in my nightmares. “You are just a filthy Lumen.” “Erin!” I shoo...